I'm killing time and it's killing me, it was never gonna be a fair fight; I'm sitting still just trying to see if the wrong will ever be right; I've made my moves but time was faster, I've never known the reason; seems to me that time's the master, and life, a killing season
Wow!!
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❤️❤️ thank you 🙏🏼
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Your welcome!💜
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I like this. Smooth and each word concise.
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Thanks, River.
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More poetry please! Nice. It is very thought provoking and enjoyable.
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Thanks, Jared. I’m not as fluent at it as you guys are. It seems that words in a poetic way hit me now and then.
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This is fantastic, Rita!
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Thanks, Sis 🙏🏼
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An excellent piece of work Rita. 💕
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Thank you, HL. I truly appreciate that.
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Phew, those last few lines got me. ❤
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Not in a bad way I hope.
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Nope. Just a wow kind of way!
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Good ❤️
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Very Powerful!
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Thanks, Gorgeous
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This is gorgeous.
Simple and effective.
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Thanks, Fedora Queen ❤️
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